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Demi God Excerpt
Chapter 9

        Demitrious felt the darkness as it surrounded his body. Humid chills surged through him like jagged claws tearing at his insides. Cold clammy mouths fed on his senses as the shadows penetrated his very being. He did not fight, but embraced the experience, owning it and making it his own. Memories and emotions flooded and emptied his life, relived a thousand times and ended a thousand ways. The past revealed the present amplified and the future clear and unwritten. Suspended in a state of painful ecstasy, he felt his body dying and his soul being reborn. All he had dreamed was coming true, his deepest desires becoming vivid reality.

        The experience only lasted a few moments. Demitrious could still taste his own death on his now cold lips. Eyes closed, the fear and excitement were suffocating. Questions riddled his mind; did it work? Is it over? Is this real? His six-foot muscular frame stood silent and motionless as he forced his eyes open. The world before him took on a superficial hue as his new eyes adjusted, light sensitive and revealing. He peered around the room, looking into the soul of each and every person present, hearing their thoughts as whispers, floating on the air and in his ears, muffled only by the droning of the uneven beats of their hearts.

        Accustomed to his new visual and auditory acuity, he tested the rest of his body. It moved with unnatural speed and accuracy. Even the slightest movement was swift and assured. He ran his hand through his long dark curls soaked with perspiration. His body fluid and limitless as if there were nothing he or it could not do. The lingering taste of death on his lips began to fade, replaced by something much stronger: a writhing fiery hunger grew from his depths, consuming, overtaking, and unrelenting. He could feel it permeating, seeping, and finally subduing all else within him. A great rage and anger took over him – instinctively controlled and calculating. All he had wanted, desired, and sought for had finally come to be.

        He tilted his head back, a bone-shaking snarl expelling from his lips, as he felt his teeth grow. Eyes now trained on those before him, he laughed hideously at the reality he now faced. “I don’t need you anymore!” he growled. The gang members panicked. Few stood in awe, consumed with disbelief, most began to flee toward the exit, but others prepared for the fight. Everything moved in slow motion as Demitrious’ senses heightened again. He licked his lips, his excitement reflected in an evil grin directed toward his former brothers and sisters. Abruptly, his right hand shot out. Clenched around the priest’s throat, he drew him effortlessly near. Demitrious could smell his terror as he embedded his teeth into the soft flesh. Gripped by fear, the priest’s now-frozen body trembled as the life giving blood was taken from it. Demitrious could not restrain himself. The taste, the smell, the feel, the pure ecstasy of the man’s blood invigorated him with an excitement he could not escape. He now thrived on the preternatural red elixir. The man’s body went limp as the last drops of blood filtered through the two tiny holes in his neck. Demitrious discarded his body and returned his attention to the others in the room. Blood smeared lips half grinning half growling he peered out through the top of his eyelids. The priest’s blood rushing through him, he could feel himself becoming stronger, faster … hungrier.

        He folded his full-length leather coat behind him and crouched slightly like a cat. His eyes flashed pale white and then crimson. “It’s play time,” he snarled. Demitrious lunged into the surrounding gang members. He ripped through their front line leaving all he encountered dead or dying. He tossed the members in all directions leveling all he touched. The gang member’s futile efforts to stop him were thwarted before they had begun. The pale glint of steel was a blur amidst the whirl wind of bodies and blood. Demitrious began to walk toward the exit parting the crowd of people before him, leaving a red sea in his wake. His thirst for blood seemed insatiable as he consumed the red life giving elixir of his victims. Many tried to escape his grasp but his speed and agility were unmatched. The avatar of death continued to stroll through the crowd seeming to egg them on.

        Suddenly sharp hot searing pain penetrated deep into his left side. He turned to watch the barrage of bullets cross the room toward him. His eyes widened as he saw the wounds he had incurred and several more appear, each screaming out in burning writhing agony. His rage exploded instinctively with survival. Demitrious launched himself at the nearest gunman and tackled him to the ground, his teeth penetrated hard and fast. Again the warm crimson pleasure filled him, exacerbating his rage as he drained and left the man to his immanent death. Another surge of pain struck him on his right side. He turned his attention to the second gunman, let out a horrific growl, and attacked. Demitrious flew at the man, grasped his neck between his hands mid air, he twisted his body and landed crouched behind the gunman’s now lifeless body. Two more gunmen strafed the space before him grinding up the body that shielded him. Demitrious flung his human shield at them, in a moments distraction he dove hit the ground and rolled. Before the men could react he forced his hand inside the one man’s chest, ripping free his heart and sunk his teeth into the remaining man. He let fall the lifeless bodies and turned once again toward his objective. Crushing and discarding of the heart over his shoulder, stretching his neck from side to side, he licked his lips and raised his eyes to meet those who remained. He motioned his hand across them as if to lay a curse upon their souls, let out another horrid cry of excitement and rage and began to walk toward them. He grinned as he approached, clenching and releasing his hands with excitement.

The tall thick oak doors, still barred from the outside, held against all efforts to open them. Screams and cries filling the room only to share their master’s fate. Demitrious continued to swagger nearer, his dark cargo pants made an eerie rubbing sound and his coat billowed gently behind him. With an evil grin and playful look in his eyes he stopped. Cornered, the men at the door turned and stared with fear and desperation. Their pale faces reflected their immanent death. Demitrious folded his arms before him and spoke. “Let me pass and you will live.” His voice seemed to echo on the now silent room. His words faded and save the crackle of the torches that lined the walls there was no sound. The men looked at him frozen and blank of expression. They stood motionless for what seemed an eternity as time suspended itself in the solemn and dull atmosphere that enveloped. Neither side moved, anxiously anticipating the other. Demitrious suddenly felt another deep penetrating sear of fire in his back. He turned from side to side slowly, the crack pop of his vertebrae realigning echoed in the void. He raised his arms to his sides as if to surrender and smiled. “Let me pass…” a voice from the crowd rang out cutting him short.

        “Or what?” From the center of the crowd a large man stepped forward. “You are one of us and therefore our possession and we will do with you what we will.”

        Demitrious saw the hint of red flash through the man’s eyes. Demitrious laughed as he leaned forward bowing and stretching his arm forward as if to bid his farewell. Peering out from under his eyelids he bared his teeth. Motioning for the man to advance “Then, do what you will…” The words faded into the heat and urge swelling from inside him, his mind became clouded and his control dwindled. The darkness within transforming to deep red consumed what humanity had remained. He watched helplessly as the beast inside unleashed itself and devastated their surroundings. Like having a dream, images no more than faint memories, feelings quick, intense and fleeting.

        Demitrious opened his eyes; head lowered he was looking at his hands gloved in red. Uncertainty filled him as he lifted his head and peered around where he now stood. Blood covered the ground and bodies and their previous parts scattered everywhere. Silence hung amongst the death that had consumed and now surrounded him. He followed the trail of carnage with his eyes. From where he stood it moved about the room sporadically and then ended. Staring at the ten foot oak doors that now lay fragmented across the entrance they once guarded. The world had become dark and motionless and he was the cause. The intense hunger he felt earlier had faded to a dull warm content, his anger all but a bad memory.

        Suddenly he curled in on himself, his mind flooded with memories. He remembered pieces of the destruction he had brought randomly attacking his insides, filling him with guilt, and strangely satisfying him all at once. I know they deserved what they got. But should I have done it? he thought. Reality and fantasy melding to cause confusion, Demitirous stood in shock and disbelief staring at the wasteland before him. Life and death would never be the same again, ever...

To Be Continued...

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